RoseGryffindor

I love it! The depth is amazing and it touched me so that I want to put it framed on my wall. Very beautiful and I like the way you ...

Beautiful!

Ahahahahahahahahahahahahaahahahahahahahahahahahaha. (That's all I have to say. :) Good job! It was hilarious. Made my day.)

I love it! It's so well written though I must say the begginning was a little confusing at first though when I started to read more I got it. You ...

I like it! The rhyming wasn't bad, I thought it was very creative. You had a lot of good things going on; metaphores and imagery and personification. Really well written. ...

Ah, I remeber haikus. We had to do a couple in school. They really challenge the imagination with their limitations. I like this one. Short and sweet yet the message ...

Beautiful! So much shown in so little words. Everyone can relate to this one way or another. Love the indepth and the imagery.

So beautiufl and simple yet so deep. I felt a deep sense of beautiful seriosness fall over me when I read it at the truth in this.

Beautiful. It has just the right amount of sadness in it so it's not too overwhelming. It's like a story and I like it like that.

beautiful. Just beautiful. I don't have much to say in ways of improving. It conveys all the hurt and innocence of the narrator.

Haha! I love it!!

Really pretty. But you need to capitalize.

Beautiful!! I got little goosebumps reading it!

Wow! This poem is so epic!! I love it! Congrats on getting it featured on YWS!!!

ahahaha Perfect! I found this just made my day, right here. This was awesome, just sayin'.