RoseGryffindor

Beautiful. If only all those haters out there could read this. Her best friend condemned her, For the things she felt inside. Her best friend now hates her, Because she ...

Wow, really long but It's so good! I know this is supposed to be about demon fighters so, in the first part with the actual demon fighters you should get ...

Pretty impressive for the middle of the night. It's not all that cheesy either. There was just a couple ( ok, a lot) grammar issues but overrall it was greally ...

This is really pretty and very creative but you should add punctuation to clear it up. red on black blue on gold and not a drop to drin kone three ...

Omygosh Solvy this poem is not ridiculous! I love it so much it's probably my favourite! I wish I was that talented when I was younger. On a September night, ...

Cute! Very creative. Silly me, I'm back here again . Holding on to something that I want far away change to "that remains far away. And, here I am, trying ...

I liked it alot, but I feel like it's rushed through alot. You need to take time to make sure it flows and detail certain scenes like prom and focus ...

It's cute and getting so interesting. I like the originality of it. But the speaking part with her sister when she tells her about Adam's IM friend request just doesn't ...

"Pant's on the ground! Pant's on the ground! Lookin' so cool with your pants on the ground!" Haha sorry, I had to do that. :) Love the poem! It's so ...

I'm not the best at grammar but I'll try. I looked at the dark sky as I lay shouldn't this be past tense? or you can make, thought "think" down ...

LIke the tons of other people, I am in total love with this story! I've always imagined what it would be like if Romeo and Juliet were in the Modern ...

Love it. Says so much with so little. I totally get what it says and definatly agree. Life may be short but all whims have a consequence if you're not ...

It was wonderful. Very intense, right on the verge of creepy alittle. I don't know if you meant to do it but the very ending, "So, I warn you, lousy ...

Finally!!! The third Ch?/Part has come out!!! I would've commented yesterday but I was tired and didn't feel like it. But now I have! And I cannot wait for the ...

Wow. This is really good. Very indepth and I love the last sentence. I would change the "Shinin'" and all those others to they're regular form of "ing". It just ...