Rosamunroe

this is quite a long sentence an i suggest a little reform on this, unless it was intentional. (original text) Understand that you are in the bones of me, the ...

There are only four mistakes i see "She running..." i think you missed a preposition This sentence is awkward i'd consider revising "He is perfect and amazingly his mine, or ...

over all it was ok... i did love the description like For the burning sun, would melt the flesh off our silver bones. i got vivid images in my head ...

Well written ... Although this just like a thousand wishes of them. Made me a little lost because I think there maybe a grammar mistake there. I really don't care ...

The simplicity of your work is quite refreshing. Especialy So please do not ignore As you have before You are my friend My best friend The playful rhyme scheme is ...

This peice is great. I thought the end especialy was very well written She looked in the mirror at the side of the chapel She smiled She remembered seeing herself ...

This is simply amazing !! I love the futuristic technology with the romance intwined. " 'Open' I quietly murmured to the front door, the metallic reflection of the door slid ...

This is simply amazing !! I love the futuristic technology with the romance intwined. Absolutely terrific!

Hi here is your review This is not a personal attack. I enjoyed your view of is refreshing to know what others think. I do however feel like i was ...

Hello here is your review "Be. With all my love, Dad." Be is a ssubordinate clause and should be linked with a main clause. I suggest changing the period to ...