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haha very nice..I liked the shortness of was an easy read that was enjoyable. I felt like I could relate to the character in a way like I daydream about ...

Wow I like this a lot I really want to read more please please please write more. I like most of the people who have commented hate rapists but have ...

I have to tell you just out of moral scrupples that I have not read this all the way...but it is getting late here and my eyes are starting to ...

This made me laugh and be sad at the same time. It was very clever and well written. Ah who cares if you can't spell customer..we are all flawed. But ...

I enjoyed this it was very well written and I liked the length. Sometimes I think people write way too long poems that don't make sense to anyone besides them ...

Very good.. at first I was picturing the scene in the Romeo + Juliet movie with Leonardo DiCaprio..then I started picturing something different which I liked it was really original ...

It was took me a while to actually understand it but I'm slow so don't take it personally. You did a good job I just had a hard time actually ...

ok I really want to continue reading but I can't figure out the order! I love this story it is so original and portrays real feelings and things that would ...

Up front I have to admit that I didn't get to read it all for a lack of time but the parts I did read were pretty good. Can I ...

I liked this I just would have liked to know maybe a little bit more of what the narrator was thinking, the exact emmotions. Then maybe you could have described ...

I liked it, as much as you could 'like' a poem like this one. I mean it is very depressing but creates a good mental image. A lot of people ...

You made me think of my cousin. He served in Iraq and will go back after he gets married. The character you portrayed in this poem touches on everything that ...

I liked it, good imagery. It made me picture a scene from a disney movie that I can't remember the name of where Goofy is a faery and has to ...

Yay, I liked it (I thought the rhyming was fine btw), it was a good story, and it makes me think. I want to know more about this old lady, ...

Haha, very nice..one thing..I disagree with LittleLoveableSock. I don't think you should have taken the 'a' out of "Before making her into a stew." When I read the poem the ...