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Thanks for your review, guffin!

This was beautiful.

I just noticed another link to nothing in someone else's poem, so it must be a glitch. If you can't see it for some reason, your word "power" was linked ...

Hello Niteowl, thanks for the review, My basic message was that sometimes the best adventures take place only in the mind. The part about the coin was talking about how ...

oooh ooh. you misinterpreted this BAD. Sorry for the incorrect grammar there, but pork-rinds are really a crunchy snack. like potato chips. Just fried fat basically. The pork-rinds were narrating ...

Thank you very much Hyena :)

Hello rbt00! A three line poem such as this is called a haiku. It has five syllables on the first line, seven on the second, and five on the last ...

Thank you for this review! The grammar just felt awkward to me. And I didn't know how to change it, but I'm glad it was good enough for you to ...

Thank you!!!! You have understood my poem for what it was meant to be. I applaud you for that. Good job!

no. no. your emotions must stay emotions. Don't let the internet take over every aspect of your life!!! D: But thanks :)

Thanks for your review!

well... first of all, I disagree with your idea of rhyming. I think rhymes can really help poems, depending on the subject and the mood. I agree that the title ...

Hey thanks! I was going for a seussian feel. :D

Thank you!

Thank you for this review :)