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Oh my goodness! I was trying to think of the word sentinels when I was writing this, but I couldn't! All I could think of was the work embargo. lol ...

Thank you for your in-depth anyalysis of this, but a lot of this wouldn't fit in with the image I was trying to create. First of all, the title was ...

Thank you. The observers are actually the streetlamps. With another read can you see that, or should I change it, because that was something I wasn't sure on myself.

I remember reading this before! :o I still like it. ^-^

It's either that or my truckload of iffy poetry. :P You can join the whole small band of followers my novel has and you can like throw parties together or ...

Ooh I'd never even thought of that! :O I should figure that out. I know a place where I can insert that reason later in the book, I'd better figure ...

Feel free to read the other chapters. I won't mind ;) Thanks for your review~

STOP GUESSING AT MY PLOT YOU'RE MAKING ME FEEL LIKE I'M WRITING A CLICHE AND GUESSABLE PLOT HRRRNNNG Thanks for your review, and I remember several times where you were ...

thaaaaank you empole

The dust created swirls because the heavy part of the dirt would sink to mud, but the light part would float on top of the puddles and swirl kind of ...

*facepalm* I really should've known that XD I need to study my animal names again. The female of cow is cow. >.< Thanks for clearing that up, and some of ...

Well seeing as it's against the rules to publish something I didn't make myself, I did make this. ;)

You're welcome. And welcome to YWS!

Thank you for your review, and don't worry about being behind. When someone reviews one of the earlier chapters, it reminds me of what has happened thus far in the ...

yesyesyes I agree with the pacing thing. I think it's because we're coming up to a point in the plot that I'm kind of scared to write, because I'm not ...