Rook

Hello Ethan, I was drawn to this poem because of the title I really love the juxtaposition between the idea of an apocalypse and also springtime, which traditionally is a ...

Hey! Great first poem! I'm going to give you a bit of general poetry writing advice since this is a great job as a first poem. Firstly, I suggest you ...

Heyo Lizz, So this is quite a poem, huh? I like how declarative and firm the sentence "dogs are our gods" is. Good start. I'm a little iffy on some ...

Hey! I'm going to try to be brief and concise in this review, so let me know if you have any questions. Okay, I think my number one issue with ...

Hello! I have a tendency to get way too verbose as I try to explain what I mean and why I think something, so I'm going to try to keep ...

Hello! Intriguing poem. I wish I knew more about what you were aiming for. Like Cas down there, I also thought maybe it was supposed to be humorous, but I ...

Hello! This was a chilling little poem! You definitely set up a really uneasy tone with the sort of foreshadowing like: covered in fake blood this time, (this one was ...

Hello! I really like this poem! It gave me some unnamed emotional response, so that's cool. I think the specific part that did that to me was: As if someone ...

Hey! You've given me some great reviews, and this is in the green room, so I guess maybe I should do one in return! I will say that this was ...

Hello! Happy review day! You're receiving the first review I've done in well over a year so sorry if I'm a bit rusty! FORM First off, let's discuss your form ...

Hi pamp! I see you're trying to do a lot with this poem! I applaud the attempt! You've put a ton of restrictions on yourself, with the whole haiku-syllable-format stanza ...

Hi pomp!! Lovely poem! Definitely different than your others in terms of tone, but still beautiful. I like how clear the purpose of this poem is. Or, it really starts ...

Hello! This was really beautiful, and honestly, it's perfect the way it is. I'm going to be reviewing this on how I personally would rather have read it though. I ...

Hello! This is quite an interesting poem! You have very striking imagery and words in many places. I especially like the alliteration of "fangs of fate," "scratching scabs," etc. However, ...

Hello! Can I just say that this is a pretty dang relatable. Other than that, though, I'm not sure if this has a lot going for it. But relatability is ...