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This is really controversial!Are you from Libya? What was it that inspired you to write this may i ask? I can see it's full of anger. It is really good ...

Thanks for the reviews :) This is a poem about a girl in my school who committed suicide, that may be why it's so personal! Thanks for the critiques and ...

I'm reading "the Historian" at the moment! It's brilliant! :) Has any body read that one before? :)

Is this better or worse ? You broke me like a china doll, Released me from your clutch. Watched me as I fell I hit the ground You walked away. ...

Thanks for your comments.I appreciate them :D

Yea your right this version is away better:D I like it:D

Thanks for your helpful comments. I have taken your advice and 'modified' the poem. I hope you prefer this one :P

Hey. I like that poem, it made me feel like I was there, watching the sunset. I think the part that I liked the most had to be Why words ...

Wow that was a brilliant poem. Well done, I can only imagine the amountb of work that was put into this, it seemed flawless. You can easily put a lot ...

That's a really sad poem=[ . . . But I awarded it with a gold star=] . . . just bacause i thought you deserved it (:

I liked it!!! ......... ..............Good stuff. Keep up the good work=]

I don't like depressing poetry, you should be happy=] There is alot more people out there who are worse off then you...(of course there is people that are better off ...

I like this letter, I thought it was well written. I especially liked the end when he tears apart the letter, it makes sense, why would you have sent that ...

its goood!!!! But not a chance that that happened in your high school:P