Rob

I really like the atmosphere you created. It's like a all hell broke loose when you saw her. It really make me feel good. It really has a lot of ...

'Twas a very honest and sweet poem. I just love the word choice , and the description of the guy. I could really see those "Blue-green eyes the size of ...

This is quite good. I really loved the emotions you dug up, especially one of the most powerfull of them all. [ hate ] The refference to the Primordial Sin ...

Maybe it's just me, but I didn't quite get the idea of the poem. I guess it's the instability of human being.. [ Yey! for the last 2 verses ] ...

A very touching text indeed. I really liked Linas' point of view. I think it had more emotion an better description of the scenery than Aidens'. I love how you ...

Oh my god.. This is the most amazing and emotional poem I have red so far. I really don't know how you did it, but my heart was filled with ...

I really liked reading this. The only thing I really hope about is that this is not a true story. The poem really brings up strong feelings, from start to ...

Wait.. wait untill I pick myself off the floor. *falls back again* What you have written is just amazing. The idea is brilliant. As I was reading , I was ...

It was a great read. I love the way the story advances , and all the feelings that emerge from the words. I feel the same always all the time ...

It's cute. I could see the whole thing in front of my eyes. The description of the moment is perfect. But I agree, it misses a climax , the point ...

I swear my heart is beating crazy. You brought back vivid memories. [ not the same end , but the same idea ] It is deep , very deep. You ...

Wow.. I read it twice , and Wow. I really like the story and the atmosphere. The two lost souls getting together in the night when everything starts over. Good ...

It is a good poem. It just sent to in front of a girl and a guy, the guy forcing her to see him as he is. I hope this ...

It is just purely epic. It carries the emotion all through it, and even more it builds up as you read along. The scenery and atmosphere just carry you away ...

What I really like about this poem is that it deals with a very common guy problem. I don't think that a guy hasn't been in a situation like this. ...