Roal

Hello, I am going to review you for today. Since Shear already did the revising then I guess I don't have to... or maybe I'm just too lazy but anyway, ...

“Hey mister boss guy, I got your painting.” Said Ali. “Good. Give it to me.” Replied the man. “Here you go.” Said Ali as he gave the painting to the ...

Rated 16+ for violence, references to crime and minor language. All events depicted in this is purely fictional, any similarities to real life people or events are purely coincidental. Contains ...

I was expecting this to be short so I could read it on my phone but instead I got this really long story. So I ended up reading on my ...

Oh my gosh, it's like totally sh- *punches self* There was nothing for me to nitpick so onward to the plot! It was very short, all I know from it ...

It's best that you tell the character first instead of describing them during the scripts, you're not writing in story format right now. EXT. A STREET IN STOCKHOLM, WINTER. DAY ...

Woo! Review time =w= First off, woah... you're only 8 years old? My goodness, when I was eight, I was barely learning English!! >_< Actually I did know some English, ...

Review time =w= It had been a few minuets minutes since the power went out the phone began to ring I answered it and all I heard was deep breathing ...

Hah! A script about your average cheerleader? I like this already :D Ellie :No , Im from California , United Kingdom . Wait what? She's from Ca, UK?????????? D: I ...

Reviewing time :o Well it was kind of like a mount Fuji but that's just me. I read this at 6 AM so please don't bother me about this right ...

Mmmmm..... reviews =w= Just reading this prologue I think I like it already :D I can somehow relate to this story since it's basically everything I think xD But yeah, ...

Yay, reviewing time :D It took me awhile review this since I never knew how I was suppose to review this xD But let me start this off first, "Chapter ...

Woah, reading this made me spill my coffee and will probably give me some nightmares inspiration lol. I'll just give you a quick-run down on this. It gave me chills, ...

Reviewing time =w= It actually died? OH THE MAKER, YES!! :D You just made my day. Rather than it, being thrust into the story without any explanation as usual =w= ...

Alright reviewing time :D Even though I kind of skim through the past part ( how evil of me >.> ), I thought that this was an interesting story. Rather ...