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RishabhParmar

  • Poetry » Supernatural, Romantic Re: Half of the World Away Isn't Far Enough to Stop You

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    Hi, It is such a nice piece of work. You poem is short but full of words enough to feel the balladry. I loved it. I sensed each and every ...

    Jul 5, 2017
  • Poetry » General, Dramatic Re: .

    Wow, I loved it. Very inspirational. The starting is good. "You are more than a name" It explains everything. I love such kind of inspirational poems. You did a good ...

    Jun 28, 2017
  • Poetry » Narrative, Culture Re: Rachel's Wedding

    Hi, Nice poem. I loved the concept. I loved the genesis part. Wow totally nice piece of work. The starting is good, graph is high, you did an amazing job ...

    Jun 28, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: My Last Goodbye

    HI, Simple and sweet poem. The starting was superb. I was reading it with patience. I was loving it. I didn't see any flaw in your poem. It is constructive. ...

    Jun 27, 2017
  • Short Story » Romantic, Narrative Re: Love art

    I love to tear-off more...............

    Jun 26, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Moonlight: Chapter One

    Ideas are transferable...I love to tear-off more........Good work!!!1

    Jun 26, 2017
  • Poetry » Culture, Realistic Re: Occitanie - Brief recollection

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    Hi Silberfee, I start reviewing this piece with the title of your poetry. Nice job, good choice of title. For some people it is a bit scary title because hardly ...

    Jun 25, 2017
  • Art » General, General Re: Mom and me

    It was a great piece but what it lacked are as follows: 1. Vocabulary: It is important to add vocab. It will give paramount touch to your piece. 2. Anxiety: ...

    Jun 24, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Last Cry

    Wow! I loved your poem. The first line is itself a good start. Nice poem. Hope to read moe balladry from you mate. Keep it up!

    Jun 24, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Last Cry

    Wow! I loved your poem. The first line is itself a good start. Nice poem. Hope to read moe balladry from you mate. Keep it up!

    Jun 24, 2017


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