Rincewind

I ran to the dry cleaners and hid there for twenty minutes. Then I climbed out and went to the Arcade. Street Fighter, Silent Scope - nachos & cheese, root ...

Yeah it wasn't really intentional. I can't really say anything im writing on this story is intentional, hehe. But I'm not going back to change the periods, the essence of ...

Thanks TBR.

"Besides, Harry was miserable before everything went his way. This guy will be uncomfortable and everything is being twisted around and upside down. That is probably more for the second ...

You are a hundred percent correct. Its amazing what anothe persons point of view can reveal. I think I will change grainy orange horizon to brilliant yellow horizon. And as ...

Good suggestion. I normally dont neglect that aspect of a short scene. I was concentrating solely on the dialogue. I am going to update it soon. Thanks for reading.

Ohh haha. In that case your a shoo-in;) Good luck Inertia!

Rei, good call. In order to captivate early on, I felt it was necessary to have them know what was going on. I'm still green at it really. As for ...

First two Chapters are done already. I'll post them tut suite.

Apparantly you can't sleep in the library. Then why do they need it so quiet? Books are a waste of time, far as I'm concerned. They say the first page ...

There was gum on the underside of my desk in second period. There was a lot of experiments going on in science. There was lots of hooting and hollering. I ...

Thank you very much. This is just a little bit of a much larger story. Bastiens motives are explained earlier, soon it will be posted as well.

Thanks! I'm walking out of the bathroom. I feel okay now. The bell rings, but my teacher doesn't care if im late. I'll be fine. God my mouth is dry. ...

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You should probobly call it Grey. Or Grey Sunday Sea of Grey The Seaside The Grey That about all I got for now.