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  • Short Story » Narrative, Humor Re: Mother's Day

    Hello alevine! CHRISSY321 here to review your very interesting story here! This did turn out to be very interesting! One question, why was this whole story written in bold? I ...

    Feb 13, 2016
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: The Dwarf

    Hello Yams! CHRISSY321 here to drop by with a quick review! This is a very interesting poem! It is very different then what I expected! There were no spelling errors ...

    Feb 13, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Other, Action / Adventure Re: Tips for Taking Over Summer Camp Chapter 20: The Road to Camp is One Filled with Walking and Rocks

    Hello again HolographicLadybug! CHRISSY321 here to review your latest chapter! This was pretty short-thug you did end it well :) Okay, so this was great chapter! The way you described ...

    Feb 12, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Other Re: Tips for Taking Over Summer Camp Chapter 19: Definition of Rowan: Not Supportive at All

    Hello HolographicLadybug! CHRISSY321 here back again to review! :D *cough tookyoulongenough cough cough* :P I think that this was another great chapter! I think it is mysterious and just makes ...

    Feb 12, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Romantic Re: DUET :Chapter 10:

    hello SereneSimpliciT! CHRISSY321 here to review your chapter that has been gathering dust all this time! :D *Just want to let you know I have not read the other chapters, ...

    Feb 11, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Warm Meals and Dead Bodies: Part Six

    Hey Tigereye! CHRISSY321 here to give a short review! Sorry it took me so long to review! I read it when you first posted it :) I think that this ...

    Feb 10, 2016
  • Poetry » General, Other Re: I'll stand, I 'll fight

    Hello fangirldivergent46! CHRISSY321 here to review your little rap/poem here! :) I think that this is a pretty good piece of writing, especially for just writing it at the spur ...

    Feb 10, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: What is Life?

    Hello Kelpies! CHRISSY321 here with a nice short review ^^ I really liked this poem! I often think the question 'What is life really about' all the time, and that ...

    Feb 10, 2016
  • Short Story » Narrative, Realistic Re: Dick and Jane

    Hello Malefica! CHRISSY321 here to do a review! :) This was a really sad story! I really feel for both Dick and Jane. The both really bonded and it was ...

    Feb 9, 2016
  • Short Story » Horror, Fantasy Re: Goodbye, Pumpkin.

    Hey SarahSquib! CHRISSY321 here to review your work! :D I think that this was a great short story! It had pretty good description, dialogue, and a nice little plot in ...

    Feb 8, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Warm Meals and Dead Bodies: Part Five

    Hey Tigereye! CHRISSY321 here to review your latest installment of Warm Meals and Dead Bodies! his was a great chapter! So action packed, and if made me even freeze and ...

    Feb 7, 2016
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Horror Re: Mrs. Creeps (Repost)

    Hello XobeytheduckX! CHRISSY321 here to drop by and review. I really liked this, because I am a horror freak! I feel really bad for this victim though! I almost felt ...

    Feb 6, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Warm Meals and Dead Bodies: Part Four

    Hey tigereye! CHRISSY321 here to give a review on your newest part! :D Sorry it took me so long, I did have not had time to do a great review ...

    Feb 6, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Other Re: Tips for Taking Over Summer Camp Chapter 18: Link, if You're Lost in This Forest, You Don't Exist

    Hey HolographicLadybug! CHRISSY321 here to review your new chapter! :D Okay, I really liked this chapter! This while story is getting good! There were a few mistakes though I wanted ...

    Feb 5, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, General Re: Warm Meals and Dead Bodies: Part Three

    Hey Tigereye! CHRISSY321 here you review your newest part! P.S. Thanks for tagging me :D Okay, I think that this is a very good chapter-but one question, how does this ...

    Feb 4, 2016


It suddenly struck me that that tiny pea, pretty and blue, was the Earth. I put up my thumb and shut one eye, and my thumb blotted out the planet Earth. I didn't feel like a giant. I felt very, very small.
— Neil Armstrong