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Re: Binge watching tv, or, How to move on with your life, or, A letter to my ex boyfriend
That is awesome. I can relate. My favorite is the beginning part though: To my Ex boyfriend When you broke up with me I watched every episode of NCIS. I ...
Dec 29, 2014 -
Re: Binding Blood - Chapter 4
This was a very interesting story! You did a pretty good job! I loved all the gory details, and action. Here are some of my favorite parts! : Jaravin’s chest ...
Dec 28, 2014 -
Re: The hero of earth chapter 4
Hey! This was interesting. I think that first off, you should have made separate paragraphs, so to kind of make it easier to read. There was also some spacing errors, ...
Dec 28, 2014 -
Re: The Test
Hi! Just dropped on by, and thought that this was interesting! It was a little weird though to follow. I think that you did pretty good over all though even ...
Dec 28, 2014 -
Re: The Brains and The Brawn
Hi! I read this, and it was great! Love the way you started out! You darted strong, and it grabbed my attention!: She was running. I could see her blonde ...
Dec 28, 2014 -
Re: Rainbow
I think that this poem is deep, and so has many meanings. It has a point like when it says: Without sadness, how would we know joy and without a ...
Dec 15, 2014 -
Re: Hidden Memories
This is a great poem. I can relate to it because when I clean my room, I will like find these things I forgot about, and start playing with them! ...
Dec 14, 2014 -
Re: Rescuing Teddy
I think that this is a cute story! The little boy sounds like a little hero! It is funny to think about it. I like the persistence in this boy's ...
Dec 13, 2014 -
Re: Tasia - Prologue
This is a great story! There is just one thing I would change. In the middle, I would try and substitute some of those cures words, with nicer ones, that ...
Dec 13, 2014 -
Re: Can it happily grow?
I think this is a great poem. There is just one thing I would fix: that it brings a smile to you, that it opens up life for you. I ...
Dec 13, 2014