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RileyJ

  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: My Horse

    A really enjoyable read. As EvensLily said, you did an excellent job of conveying the message. There are just a couple times in the poem where I feel like the ...

    Oct 1, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Sunshine and Sirens

    This is really excellent. One thing I find a lot of authors have difficulty with is knowing when to use allusions and what allusions to use. Often times they don't ...

    Oct 1, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Ode To My Girlfriends Fish

    I actually really enjoyed this piece. I think you did a marvelous job with taking something trivial and writing about it so elegantly. What's really interesting is how you manage ...

    Oct 1, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Bone Queen

    Wow, I am absolutely stunned at how many things I love about this and they're all in such a short space! First and foremost, I am a huge huge fan ...

    May 31, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: I take it all back.

    I had such a hard time trying to review this poem, only because I had such a difficult time reading it. Let me explain, I don't mean that it's awful, ...

    May 31, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Pretty Little Lucifer

    I read the first stanza of this poem and immediately assumed I was going to hate it. I assumed that it was just going to be a cliche of the ...

    May 31, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: I Forget My Age.

    This piece is very interesting, a step or two away from being thuroughly enjoyable. The language is almost cryptic but sensible, and the meaning is deep and appliable. But I ...

    May 31, 2011


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