Renard

F@ck a frog.... 'You are the only here baby.' Por favor, aprende a escribir Inglés correctamente. Porque yo no puedo ser molestado a escribir a usted por temor a que ...

I am really impressed with the trilogy you have created. I am so looking forward to the next entry. I love the way you have introduced Alex's character into the ...

So I'm on entry two. Not exactly sure where this piece is going to go but I am interested to find out. After reading the second entry, I see what ...

Hey Bloodink! I don't have anything negative to say about this piece because it is amazing! You have got something really unique and special with your idea here and I ...

Well. I loved this piece. My favourite line? “Yeah, I watch you, and then do the complete and exact opposite.” It captures the essence of the relationship between the characters. ...

Not sure what's happened with the spacing and line editing, but it's all gone out of whack and I don't have the time, nor the inclination to fix it. :) ...

You're welcome, I'll take the comments on board and let you know when the next instalment is up. ;)

Thank you for the comments, I will try and get my tenses sorted out. :) I will let you know when there's more up in the future. xx

Ah... I wondered if people would pick up on this... I will explain more about why she is there and what is wrong with her in the following chapters, if ...

Aww. This is a lovely response to my work. Thank you. xx :)

Aww. Thanks for the positive comments. :)

Awww. These are really nice comments. Thank you. I will let you know if I post more of this work in the future. :)

Awww. Thank you for taking the time to review it for me anyway. Glad you liked it. :)

I did, very much. And you're welcome. ;)

Hee-hee. Thanks for the tip. ;) xx