Renard

Words take me happens all the time. - Took the words right out of my mouth. Beauty suffering Beauty suffering Beauty suffering Beauty suffering - Tapping into some beauty is ...

The Holy Bible ... for a moment, I thought I was going to hear commending THE Bible and thought I had gone mad. Then I realised. I like the fact ...

Firstly: I love the title of this piece. Secondly: I am starting to notice that you have an obsession with blood. 'Garden of words and flowers of blood.' Other than ...

'the shallow whore' = harsh! LOL What a way to delve into a piece?! Um... question: 'A begign dictator with a swollen face.' A what dictator? Is that supposed to ...

An acrostic poem. It's been ages since I read (or wrote) one of these. Not exactly what we'd come up with in school. :) Best lines: 'Uncle Blair, what's a ...

'The world is on the cusp of censored morale.' I think we made the cusp actually. :) Hmm... The message and overall style of this pieces comes off as quite ...

This is the most 'you' work I have read so far. As much as I would like to, irritatingly, I can't actually disagree with any of the points you make. ...

Yes... I think I have interpreted this the right way and it is really sad. :( 'He goes blind once again He closes his eyes' You have displayed the emotions ...

Surprisingly, this is very romantic for you and not your usual dig. I'm impressed, because this is something I didn't think you were capable of. So it was a nice ...

Firstly, I love the title. Although, it's dramatic, I could say that it is a tiny bit clichéd. :) In context: 'I give you the long cold stare' It works ...

Right then. I'm intrigued as to why 'you' as within the poem only come in about half way through? This is an interesting choice. :) 'her daughter is beautiful to ...

Ok. So I know I have already reviewed this piece, but I am going to do it again because I want to for review day. I'm going to pick at ...

Okay. I'm going to be really picky here. First of all: name your characters! 'the boy said to the girl.' You will NEVER see this in professional work and it ...

"I’ll be early today for pasta.” Not what I was expecting! LOL. But I like it. :) So... this piece is a lot longer than I expected, but the dialogue ...

'I clutched the edge of the bleachers with my life.' No you didn't. I'm sorry, I don't meant to get angry at you, but when I read yet another work ...