Renard

Helloo! You have a very interesting tone to your writing. I am impressed by the professional overtone: 'Mme. Forestier, quite overcome,' However, there are occasions where the language feels a ...

Well.... this is incredible. XD The pacing and the structure are very professional. The first line: 'This night had a razor sharp edge to it...' really sets the tone of ...

I liked this piece based on the premise of your first line. Nice one! As for the rest of the piece... it doesn't disappoint. Reading through the first couple of ...

I know you are swaying between fact and fiction in this piece; but I'm not sure if it is needed for the reader to be honest, because at times... it ...

The ideas behind this piece are very strange - but in a good way. The piece was intriguing, but didn't make complete sense. Why did Mrs Monroe and your unnamed ...

First of all... I was drawn to your work because I am very interested in the subject. And you didn't disappoint. ;) I love the opening line: '"We are the ...

Aw. I was little disappointed. This work was GREAT! But it was really short. :( I know it's a short story... but I want more! XD Um... to review: I ...

Your title intrigued me. However... there are some glaring errors with this work. As a piece of poetry - artistically - it's very good. Really, really good. But, there are ...

The title intrigued me. The poem intrigued me. I love the references to different imagery of a theatre... puppets, pianos... etc. Brilliant! I find this work to be really original ...

Ok... so from the very beginning you establish your voice and your genre and your story in general. I am impressed. It has a very professional tone to it. If ...

This is honestly one of the weirdest things I have ever read? Not exactly sure what is going on. LOL. Don't know what the point of the story was... just ...

Hey! You were right to give the warning. This is err... sad. :( But also really well written and very enjoyable. I love the characters, especially James. The relationships and ...

Hi there 567ajt! Hope you were having a nice day (before you read this.) So I know you're a fan of dishing harsh reviews. And I thought you might be ...

Hello! I love this poem. It's really interesting. You made me laugh with this line: 'Haunts, shadows, playing craps' though. I know what craps is, it just seems like a ...

First of all, I admire that you are trying to write outside of your comfort zone. I love people who push themselves creatively... and you certainly seem to. So... your ...