Rena0421

Thank you for sharing this and I'm sorry that this ever happened to you. You have my sympathies and you are extremely brave to write this. Amazing job, might I ...

I'm sure it rocks and all but...what language is this? But truly, I like the format. Makes me wish I understood it to read it. I wonder if this is ...

Well actually, I write all the time. Surprising to see that I have NOTHING posted here. But I'm more of a critique-r type thingy mabob. I don't know what you ...

Raven, This was interesting. Maybe I'm looking too deeply into it all but this made me think. I had to think and figure out what you meant by it. But ...

l0l. thank you, Ayumi. You were extremely helpful. But its funny how everyone has a different translation. I was truly interesting to see how the Spanish version sounded against the ...

oh, gracias to all! Muy helpful[all I know is that ayudeme means help me??] l0l. Thanks you guys. -Rena.

Oh, very interesting. Nice job and yes, it did sound like something I've heard/read before. Be weary of that. But if you haven't heard/read anything like this before then nice ...

Nice. It was so short and to the point and packed with...umph? Yeah, umph. I like. Keep it up. -Rena-

First off, welcome to YWS! Nice having you(: Your poem was great, perfect, really. Nice job(: Keep up the good work.

This wasn't good at all, I'm sorry. It was crude and inappropriate for no good reason. And maybe it's just me but I didn't understand it at all. It was ...

Hey! I'm in a rush to church but I read it. I love it. I can't accurately critic it at this moment but I shall return. Keep up the good ...

Wow, I like. The picture was nice, too. And also, your avatar reminded me of the poem as well. Keep up the good work.

Oh, clever! I loved it! But I'll say, it was a give away in like the second paragraph when you said to take the water bowl down stairs. But all-in-all, ...

Oh, I like. I had to re-read it once then I saw what it meant. Good job! it's something new. It's nice.

Hi, I'm Rena. So, I really liked this. It was nice but truthfully, towards the middle some of the stanzas had a few too many words that sort of threw ...