Rei

Wow. That was very well done. Simple and elegant, with a really nice concept.

It's not likely that I will write this as an actual novel, or even a longer short story. It was just meant to be a little fairy tale for the ...

I think I'll have to second that. I can't give any suggestions or really pieces of critizism, so I'll just say that it was very funny.

yeah, I know it's not really proper poetry, but I had a bad day and it had to do with my Michael getting into one of his moods. I had ...

That was intense. Perfect way to express the way many people feel on that particular day.

You can thank St. Lawrence College for that. The program I'm in is for what one of my profs calls a "professional helper", and we're learning to develop all kinds ...

Gotta say that I'm on yourside with this one. It's unfair to critisize something as subjective as whether or not a book is good. With art and literature, people are ...

Oh yes, I have definitely found my unicorn in Mike.

HA! I love it. Very Monty Python.

yeah, the first line didn't really work. I have no specific suggestions. Just change the tone. It didn't seem to fit was this poem was about.

I really don't know how I feel about saying this yet, but I think I may have found my unicorn.

It is kind of nifty. All teenagers are like that sometimes. A lot of us in res don't even get out of bed until half an hour before class starts

Congradulations, Snoink. You deserve it!

A cute piece of randomness, if not very memorable. I also second what Ari said.

That's basically the big problem with the entertainment industry. Not just in books, but in movies, TV, and music. They see one book etc. that's success and suddenly everyone wants ...