Published February 12, 2006
Too many emotions for words
My mind become muddled
A Unicorn in human form
The man who captured my heart
Who pulled me from the dark place
Has his own shadows of the past
His own weaknesses too
As unsure as I am about him
What he's got hidden in his heart
There is one thing I know
He is my one and only
And I will always love him
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It was pretty though. I hope everything is alright though.
I liked the part:
Has his own shadows of the past
His own weaknesses too
Everybody has one, that's for sure.
yeah, I know it's not really proper poetry, but I had a bad day and it had to do with my Michael getting into one of his moods. I had to get out how I felt and wanted to share it.