Rei

My friends, I give you the results when an arrogant sadistic criminal becomes a poet.

I think this is a perfect example of why I don't really like poetry. It's a fascinating read, and there are some great images. The part about the cat was ...

Gays do reproduce biologocally sometimes. They just choose to spend their lives with someone of the same gender. Get over it. There are lots of straight people who end up ...

Very clever, and so many so very true observations.

It wasn't a bad read, if a little dull. I'm not sure I understood what the whole point of the piece was. I do have one point to pick at, ...

It really is fascinating what the brain can produce out of bordome. This is generally not my kind of things, but I enjoyed reading it, nonetheless.

I agree. And it was absolutely hillarious.

It's good that you keep trying because you CAN write. I like this muchly and have no comments to make.

Sorry. That first line really turned me off. Whether you are or not, an opening line like that makes it sound like you're just copying Frankenstein.

Not bad. You just gotta accept ot for what it is befor eyou read it. (And ignore liz when she uses the word cliche. She calls almost everything on this ...

Yeah, very forced, with absolutely no rhythm. Very bland, and uninteresting.

I actually got my prom dress at a thrift store. After paying $60 for the ticket, I had almost no money left.

It's very bland and uninteresting. At the very least, you should have some sort of motive for why your character did what he did.

You're all utterly bonkers.

Not bad. I definitely think it's a good start, but felt that you could do more with it, and expand on the concept. The repetition was the only thing I ...