Rei

Comments please? :(

That's it. Yoshi's lost it. Let's pump him full of drugs and hope for the best.

Well, I don't say you suck. Definitely a decent piece of work for a bit of insomniac ramblings.

First of all, you need to divide the paragraphs properly. It's a real eyestrain when reading big clumps like this on the computer. Second, you need a new way of ...

Nice, but there were a few lines that just did not make any sence to me, like "math me apart like a baby bird". I really did not get that.

The American Dream. Interesting. The Canadians Don't have a dream, nor do the Australians. That's because the British didn't give us one. The British don't have a dream either. There ...

Same here. Not sure what the point of this was.

Thanks. It's nice to know other people in this world still remember it. I don't think I've ever come across a piece of art* that was more influencial to my ...

Power of Voodoo Who do? You do Do what? Mind me of the babe. Gotta love that song, eh. David Bowie is the best.

Personally I think any story is worth writing. If you have an idea don't wory if it's good or bad. Just write it. But first I think you need to ...

Sounds cool. I wish we could do that now. Too bad I have no ear for music, so it's really hard for me to imagine words on a screen/page as ...

It's a good start, but I think you could do more with it, maybe add one or two verses.

I really don't understand the point of not using capital letters. It just makes it look very imature, like you don't know the rules of your own langauge.

Yes, very lovely. Just an honest, heart-felt piece of writing. Not very poetic, but it's so real, not trying to be more than it is, that it doesn't matter.

It seemed kind of bland to me. I liked the feelings behind it, but they didn't show very strongly through your words. Try doing it free verse, rather than rhyming ...