Published July 18, 2005
THE TURTLEDILE HUNTER!
Prologue!
*song eternity plays*
DUN DUN DUN
Well anyways in the deep wilderness of Minnesota a Kid named Greg er..... Bob has lost his candy bar to a wild and ELUSIVE turtle code named B.O.C.S (Bar of Candy STEALER) . This wild and elusive turtle like to take peoples candy to make them cry. B.O.C.S found Bob on his front steps eating a milky way. Bob was did not know B.O.C.S was there. B.O.C.S used his ninja skills that he learned from Napolean Dynamite and the Teenage Ninja Turtles to take Bob's candy bar with out him knowing.
Suddenly Bob tries to bite his candy bar but it is not there B.O.C.S runs off to Lake Phalen with it. But Bob does not cry he uses his newly acquirred psychic skills to get these four clues.
1.Its a turtle.
2. It likes candy bar's.
3.It likes chocolate.
4. It can be found at lake Phalen.
What will Bob do to get this mischevious turtle?
What part of Lake Phalen does B.O.C.S live it?
Has B.O.C.S eaten Bob's candy bar yet?
Where is Lake Phalen?
What's Bob's real name?
Will liz be attacked by a hippo?
Will Alex fall off a cliff?
Will Bob die?
WHO KNOWS!?!?!?
THE END OF PROLOGUE!
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YAY! PRETTY COLORS and yes it is a split personality.
Call the ambulence!
(couldn't resist:P)
*has a seizure*
I think he's both. Spilt personalities are fun.
*smiles*
yes you're officially nuts. Is it Greg or Bob? Or does Greg/Bob have a spit personality?
YAY!
*goes crazy with Yoshi*
You said you'd post this earlier...
Wow have i gone crazy yet?
It blinds! It blinds!
Oh, and don't forget to but a comma before your but. XD
PART ONE
When we left our Hero Greg er........Bob he was on his front steps starting to plan his attack against B.O.C.S on his front step while B.O.C.S was running to Lake Phalen.
Meanwhile ...............
Alex couldnt find a cliff to jump off of so he hid under a rock and the hippo missed Liz.
Anyways.........
Bob grabs his bike and a bat and speeds down to Lake Phalen while B.O.C.S climbs a tree to hide in.
BOB BIKES AROUND LAKE PHALEN 348758723957676789673647637816831835.08739587290560935923757 times and still he cant find B.O.C.S. Bob changes his name to THE TURTLEDILE HUNTER!.
Finally Bob THE TURTLEDILE HUNTER!gets tired and runs into the tree that B.O.C.S was hiding in.
THE END OF PART ONE!
More questions to think about!
Will Bob THE TURTLEDILE HUNTER! be able to do the matrix?Will Bob THE TURTLEDILE HUNTER! be able to get his candy bar back?[color=cyan]Will the duck on the other side of the lake kill the chicken in Texas?Will a monkey be killed by B.O.C.S?
Who is BigFoot?
All questions to be answered in PART TWO!
Why is there a white truck in front of my house with guys dressed up in white coats with a strecher?
Oh well!
That's it. Yoshi's lost it. Let's pump him full of drugs and hope for the best.