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I voted no as well. Very well written, but there's nothing to grab the reader. It's something that could be said for thousands of dark fantasy or horror stories. For ...

Just keep posting on sites like this, and listen to the advice you get. Writing isn't something you learn the way you learn math. It comes from practice, feedback, and ...

We generally don't really care how well you're skills are developed or how talented you are. Most of us tend to critique everyone's work the same, regardless of who wrote ...

You're welcome. It's always good to hear positive feedback. You'll get a lot of people here thinking that you can't give a helpful critique unless you only point out the ...

Well, you tried it, and that's the point. Nothing ever has to come from it. Personally I find stories that are set in places that are supposed not "real" more ...

That was kind of the point. It's supposed to be surreal. Besides, you try responding properly to any insult but the last one when they're being thrown at you one ...

I know I'm not the best example for this, but you should never say your work sucks, no matter how little effort you put into it. This isn't fabulous, but ...

Well, to me being predictable isn't a good or bad thing. I use whatever idea works for what I am trying to accomplish. If I surprize you in the end, ...

I just wish Brad would allow us to see this side of him all the time, not just in his poetry. He never let me see it, and it caused ...

What happened? Where did this go?

Yeah, the lulling nature is it's best quality. Who says you need to remember exactly what you read as long as the feelings behind it have a lasting effect?

Not pointless. I did it so I would get more people to read it.

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I would be very concerned about anyone who could find more logic in this than I do, mainly because I have no idea what it's about either.