Thanks for the reply Snoink. To be honest, I think most of the changes I made really sucked! There's no reason that I'm capitalizing "it". I thought you were supposed to! Yeah I'm going to take out that cliche, I don't even know why I put it there... #-o
I put the sentence "The only weapon he carried was a small dagger" in because Griffinkeeper told me to. Maybe I shouldn't listen to other people too much! I agree, the other sentence was a lot better than this one.
I actually haven't got around to writing chapter 2 yet because I've been really busy...but I'm working on It! :thumb:
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