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Thanks, Snoink. I hate essay-writing, and I know I have written better essays than this, but it's the only one I kept. Too bad I didn't keep my essay on ...

To be perfectly honest, I can't remember the title of the one Gordon Korman book I read. It was on a recommended reading list of youth fiction, and I was ...

It's fairly interesting and very unique. I don't like it or dislike it, really. Sounds like something you just wrote for yourself. Makes me wonder who the princess is.

Yeah, well, nuts to you.

I loved the simplisity of it. It's a very rare thing, I find, to see such simplisity that doesn't fall flat. And this doesn't. The stanzas you added aren't really ...

Darn it all. I didn't get a cookie. Pretty amusing, and all the facts are worked in really smoothly.

I've read that! Have you read it's paralex, Ender's Shadow? To be perfectly honest, I liked Ender's Shadow more than Ender's Game.

Yeah, nothing special, but I did like the rhythm of it. You just have to read it right. Almost all the rhyming seemed to fit just fine.

You are NOT stupid. Heck of a lot smarter than me, at least. I like it. I have no particular suggestions or comments other than that it conveyed your feelings ...

So true, Griffin. I think you, emotion_less, and hekate got everything. About your use of periods as a rule, you always use one or three.

Thanks for you support, everyone. I really hope I win. I also submitted the monologue in my play. But I won't know for a few more months if I win. ...

It's okay if it was just inspired by the dream, but if you want to write an actual dream sequence, it needs to be a little more disjointed.

Thank you SO much. This is exactly the type of crit I like to see, but so few know how/want to give. It tells me what I'm doing wrong in ...

Kind of amusing. I liked the choice of characters. That was very interesting. Nothing much to pick at. So far everything's already been said. Just one thing, though. It's spelled ...

I'd have to go along with what Sam said. It's very beautifully written, and has a nice feel to it. But overall, it doesn't have much of a point to ...