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Very beautiful. It's got a lot of passion in it. And honestly, creative writing teachers are frequently big idiots when it comes to writing that is directly from the heart. ...

Not bad. It could use some revision. Focus your idea a little more and maybe give it a little more feeling. Rhyming words like free and sea are not bad. ...

I was not talking about the concept of cutting. I was talking about what this POEM sounded like to me, not the theme of the poem. As I said it ...

I pretty much have to second everything bob said except when he told you not to do rhyming poems just because you're not good at them yet. Which is just ...

Yes, it was a bit rushed, but if you slow down and give us a nothing few minutes to get to know the characters before the conflict gets going. it ...

I really enjoyed the tone of this poem. It was very honest and very real without being angsty in an annoying way. The rhyme was also used very well. The ...

I found the book to be very poorly written. The story is essentially Star Wars without the depth and maturity, and with a little LOTR mixed in. That's not a ...

There are all kinds of different poetry, Gal, with all kinds of different intentions. It wouldn't surprize me if lots of medieval poets wrote about things and people so they ...

Man, that was intense. It really drew me in to the point where I hardly noticed you were purposly not using the letter E. Every word was perfectly placed. The ...

I really don't like the character portrayed in this. She seems very self-rightious and superior. For me to be on the side of the narrator in a poem like this, ...

My favourite of them would have to be Boio. CRACK and Helping Hand sound too overtly uplifting and inspirational with the lesson in mind. And as for How Far I'd ...

I'm not sure what you were trying to do with this. To be perfectly honest, it just sounds like a bunch of immature whining, written in anger, about not finding ...

Well, part of what makes it "classic" is that it has stood the test of time, or can be considered timless. People remember it. So yeah, there isn't really a ...

Very nice. There was some grammarical weirdness in the first paragraph, but nothing that really stands out. It held my attention very well, and I could tell exactly what disease ...

I do have a personal dislike for this kind of beginning, but you could pull this off. You've got a interesting, authentic voice. However, I'm not sure I like that ...