Regime

Hi, this is Regime. I quite like the plot of this chapter, as well as the characters within it. It’s cute how Harold reacts to Alice’s rejection, but it’s also ...

Hi, this is Regime. I haven’t read the rest of your story, but that’s okay. I do like the first paragraph, but I think it could be more engaging. For ...

Hi, this is Regime. This poem is very short, and I don't really review poetry, but I'll try my best to help. I found this poem interesting, yet something tells ...

Hi, this is Regime. So, I really like this poem. I don’t review poetry often, but I’ll try. At first, I get that you used the word ‘cosmonaut’ for someone ...

Hi, this is Regime. I haven’t read the rest of this story, but that’s okay. I like how you begin with action—that really draws a reader in. The sentence ‘Kaiser ...

Hi, this is Regime. I liked the story’s descriptions, and the idea is spectacular with even a theme tied within it. However, I found the man’s thoughts a bit invasive ...

Hi, this is Regime. The first paragraph really confused me until I reached the end. I get that it ties to the ending, but it doesn’t have a place in ...

Hi, this is Regime. I did not read the other related stories, but I decided to review this one. It confused me a bit—was it a dream Eddie had about ...

Hi, this is Regime. It was a bit of a different reading. While I like the idea of the story, I felt that much of it was only telling me ...

Hi, this is Regime. I haven’t read the rest of this story, but that’s okay. I did enjoy the first paragraph because I liked how you described Jason’s pain. What ...

A review, an opinion. :) You could develop your character’s thoughts slightly in the first paragraph to better show how everything reminds her of ‘him’. The beginning sentence of the ...

Your punctuation seems a bit random, making me feel like I'm being cut off in a few lines. But other than that, I enjoy that first line, and the second, ...

Although I can see everything that's going on, I don't feel emotionally attached to Alistair. Try to show how he feels as you describe the scene. Also, sentences have rhythm. ...

Ok, first review, and I don't really know what I'm doing. But I think you do! I love the emotion and thought put into this. Because you use punctuation, this ...