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AGREED Authorian. Psst, you saved me from being lashed. Ty :)

Thank you so much :D

Well, the reader is supposed to interpret what the person is. He could be an angel, a demon, an anything, its upto the readers. That was an option I kept ...

I basically thought of it as numbness, the kind one goes through while depression.

Thanks :D

I liked how you started off. And this is definitely a good first attempt, better than mine though xD anyways, this poem has many meanings to it, every poem does, ...

Thank you and yes, personal experience. Good try at reviewing, I suck at it too :p

Actually, I wrote it this way to make it relative in different ways, anyways, I'll keep your advice in mind. :)

Thank you :) Well, it was actually "their reality" because they lied, so "we" here were not aware of it in the past, so their reality is actually the truth ...

Relative. TOTALLY. Cool work.

It's beautifully framed. Really. And if you wanna write something on a serious note, you could use words as sentences. You know what I mean? Like- Pain. Full stop. Just ...