Redkitty274

Thank you for the ideas, they do help but as you see my very first viewer gave me all my mistakes and they helped a lot but I really appreciate ...

hahaha thank you but I had learned from the reviewer before you and I now know the mistakes I did, and I will mke a better story

it was really good, you should be celebrating it's amazing

I found this fascinating, relatable and plain beautiful, you said it real well, I mean you use your words powerfully, I like how this pain, is like a pain of ...

WHY!!!!!! YOU MADE ME CRY SOOOOOO MUCH, THIS WAS BEAUTIFUL!!

WHY!!!!!! YOU MADE ME CRY SOOOOOO MUCH, THIS WAS BEAUTIFUL!!

I liked this, I thought it was creative, I thought it was funny but I think the ending could've been a bit better but seriously I loved this!

Well done, I mean it well done I loved this so much

I literally just got up and applauded you, I literally stood up and clapped, this is amazing!!

well its amazing

Don't speak

I write it the way I feel, like the way you write yes I have read your story, and I don't need to give you corrections cause its amazing, and ...

well you gave me a review as long as my story, I thank you for it, but it was really long and I wrote like that for a reason, and ...

Oh my god I loved this so much, it was very powerful, I loved everything about it, this is amazing I say very good work, and keep going

thanks for the fee back but I don't appreciate all the corrections I meant to write it that way, I feel disrespected so if you please don't do this again ...