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Re: Sourd-Muet
Hello it's Red Hmm your story really confused me. I know it opens with a friend telling the MC his writing isn't that good. Then he paragraphs five and six ...
Apr 13, 2016 -
Re: The Things We Do For Love
Loved it! Really funny and so cute. I think you could have described more how Ben had to pretend to be a princess. More humor opportunities but overall really funny. ...
Feb 16, 2016 -
Re: Earthquake Chapter 1 rewritten and re-approached.
I'll be coming to review this later!
Feb 9, 2016 -
Re: The New Life Program
Thank you so much. I appreciate a third reviewer!
Feb 9, 2016 -
Re: The New Life Program
Great advice thank you!
Feb 9, 2016 -
Re: The New Life Program
Thank you for your feedback. Also her parents don't work the blue collared jobs, I wanted to hint her father was a minister and her mother is dead because he ...
Feb 9, 2016 -
Re: Earthquake Setting Description Excerpt
You mean similes
Feb 5, 2016 -
Re: Earthquake Setting Description Excerpt
Yeah sure! Sounds good
Feb 5, 2016 -
Re: Distress in a White Dress
Good job catching the errors I made I will keep those in mind. I appreicate the reviews and happy review day!
Oct 26, 2015 -
Re: Distress in a White Dress
Actually the first review had the problems with the first line as well. Anyway thanks for the review. I'm glad you liked the twist.
Oct 26, 2015 -
Re: Distress in a White Dress
Thank you for your feedback
Oct 14, 2015 -
Re: Postscripts (Chapter 3 Part 2: Tish)
Gotcha
Aug 10, 2015 -
Re: New York
Also I was thinking maybe stretch their conversation a bit longer I feel that it's used between her and Josh.
Aug 5, 2015 -
Re: Disappointments then Achievements: Chapter 1
Oh right, they are probably ten. Also your right kids who do go through more i think grow up faster... I imagine though kids who grew up in an orphanage ...
Aug 3, 2015 -
Re: All We Have is Time; Chapters 7-14
I checked their not. :(
Aug 1, 2015