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thank you for the review

This is very good. I like the imagery!

I think I will review part 2 but this is a really strong story so far. I really enjoy it.

I think I will review part 2 but this is a really strong story so far. I really enjoy it.

Hey, um, I think this was posted in the wrong place.

Thanks for the feedback, but I'm confused on what you're saying. I hope I made it clear that I meant "keyboard" of a computer not an instrument. I think you're ...

Thank you for your review.

Thank you for your comment. It was fun to write.

Thank you for your review and like. It was very helpful. I am working on revising it now, but I think I'm making it worse.... It's okay. It'll get there.

Thank you!

Thank you so much for the review! It was very insightful and helpful and I appreciate that you pointed all my sillly grammar mistakes. Also the suggested are very good ...

Mind if I nudge myself in this conversation? I think Liz is understand thus sympathetic in this situation because she is desperate, and I understand that she would hold onto ...

Thank you for the review and pointing out the mistakes.

It is an interesting story. Don't forget to put those interesting ideas in your play to make it more clear to the reader.

Also even though this is not a formal review: I liked the ideas behind the piece. I needs a lot of proofreading, but I know you can do it!