RedRidingBoots

Thanks for your feedback! I will be sure to take all your critiques into account when I write the second draft.

Hey Hira! I'm glad you're enjoying my silly, socially awkward cowboys. It makes me happy that you had nothing but praise for Sheep Dogs. It is the first work that ...

Thank you for your feedback! Im glad most of my mistakes were grammatical and can easily be fixed. I agree with you that some things feel a bit clunky and ...

So Elias dose infact strugle with lonelieness but he also smokes because it was norma for the time, this is the late 70's which will be more apparant throught the ...

Thank you for your feedback. I'm going in and editing things. The only thing that im going to tell you is i specifically mention the stars like theyre in a ...

So Micha has migraines that make him forget things depending on how painful they are. Why Micha can't remember Simon at first is due to one of these migraines and ...

HAY!!!! This looks like it has potential to be great, but right now, you are telling me what is happening, not showing me. Give room for descriptions and let the ...

This is amazing, I like the story you tell with it. My cat is the same, except I am constantly saving birds from her and trying to keep my hands ...

It is based on the movie Brokeback Mountain, so brace yourself.

Thank you so much for your feedback! So, your first critique makes sense because you don't know as much as I know about Elias at this point, so you wouldn't ...

beautiful work! i enjoyed reading it.

I relate to this so much, you have no idea