RedMoon

Oh my gosh. The FEELS!!! Okay, let me take a deep breath here and just think for a minute. Sorry, this is my first review in a very long time, ...

I just read the first (part?) of this (chapter?) and I think that you did a lot of good with the second (part?). So, you did pretty good here. You ...

Oh, so they stayed together? That's really nice (unless I read it wrong). I like that. I hope that they continue to stay, because I am rooting for a relationship ...

Okay, so this was a really good essay. I'm not sure, really, what you need my help for. All you have is a few superficial things that need fixing and ...

I don't know biographies very well, but I do know essays. I've been reading and writing them since January, and thankfully I've picked up a few things. I'm going to ...

This was a beautiful story. I felt so bad for Winta, but then I didn't so much because I knew that she didn't want pity, nor did she deserve it. ...

This puts a whole new meaning to short story. This is pretty good. I suppose that it was a thought put down on paper. I like it. Only one question. ...

This story is really good. You've got a great beginning here. I know that you've gotten a lot of good reviews on this, and they're all well deserved, but I'm ...

Just so you know, I have not read your previous chapters, so I'll focus mostly on what I see here. I can't tell you much about your cohesion of chapters, ...

Okay, so I should first tell you that this is not the kind of story that I usually read, but the title interested me as did the description. I think ...

This is a very interesting story, one that I might like to read again, if I ever had the time, and that comment is a compliment, just so you know. ...

Nice job, again. This was awesome, just like all of the others. I'm not going to repeat myself, because honestly, I don't feel like it. Sorry. I'm just waking up, ...

I have one question and one question only: Did you plagiarize? Just kidding, though seriously, I was tempted to look this up in a search engine and see if you ...

Okay, so I understand the point of a deadline. Trust me, I spent all night one night finishing up something for my English class too. I'm probably just going to ...

Okay, I just have one question. Is this the end of the story? 'Cause if this is, well, that sucks because this is really fun. Like I said with the ...