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Re: Becoming a Good rider
Thank you! Yes, I ride Western, yes this is a class assignment. I'm always terrified to write about writing because I worry I won't get it spot on and that ...
Feb 15, 2017 -
Re: Becoming a Good rider
Good then?
Feb 15, 2017 -
Re: Song of the Dead
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Feb 15, 2017
Very interesting poem, I like it, a lot different from the usual poem we read with rhymes and a light and cheery atmosphere. Grammar issues: In the third line you ... -
Re: Girl at the Coffee Shop
Thanks so very much, I appreciate it ^_^
Oct 30, 2016 -
Re: Girl at the Coffee Shop
Thank you so very much, I appreciate the review! :D
Oct 30, 2016 -
Re: I chose life
Thanks a bunch, I don't know why I write pieces like this one. I'll just start typing and something like this will be the end result. I appreciate your review ...
Oct 1, 2016 -
Re: Home, Across A Sea
will you read and review my work, The Cowboy?
Aug 6, 2016 -
Re: That Dude, That Dude
Seriously, I really liked your poem. Made me laugh. Great rhyming. No critique really. I loved reading it all. I'm no grammar expert but I see no mistakes. I needed ...
Jan 13, 2016 -
Re: That Dude, That Dude
This girl, this girl Will give it a whirl Review, review That's what I'll do Your poem, this poem It made me laugh Chuckling for a minute and a half ...
Jan 13, 2016 -
Re: Do You Believe
This wasn't meant to be an argument,first off. I wasnt trying to say everykne who isn't a Chrisitan is unsatisfied. God shaped hole is a song lyric,that's it. As for ...
Aug 20, 2015 -
Re: Do You Believe
Not my point buuut OK. This was just a question, a question,Do you believe? No conversions,no arguing not preaching either. Just a question is all. But thanks f9r the review
Aug 20, 2015 -
Re: Stoneslide - Original Short Story
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May 31, 2015
Good plot,i like it. You moved too fast between characters though, I want to get to know each one as a reader. I like that the characters are animals, creative ... -
Re: C'est la vie
YWS won't let me Copy and paste it, it shows up blank, lol, here's the link to Can You Hear Me on another writing website, you can read it there ...
May 14, 2015 -
Re: Can you hear me?
:) thanks
May 4, 2015 -
Re: Can you hear me?
It won't publish my work from a different website, so I will put the link here for you to go read, then please place opinions here in the comments.
May 4, 2015
