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Re: The King That Could Not Rise From the Floor
I really, really liked this! God I love the main character; the girl in this story. She seems like such a fiery spirit and I'm a huge sucker for female ...
Jul 23, 2021 -
Re: Loving you, me, and us
Each Haiku sounds so very, very pretty! I applaud you for that and your creativity in portraying your theme! I will say that I don't think the first two haiku ...
Jul 21, 2021 -
Re: how many bruises can you hold inside you (draft 2)
Lovely poem that I can relate to greatly. Depression is a whirlpool of frantic emotions and endless self-hatred. Luckily for me, I managed to get the help I need and ...
Jul 21, 2021 -
Re: On Wings of Fire: Chapter 1, Part 2
Loved this chapter, and I can't wait to meet the angel Fyn will travel with! You've done a really good job of displaying the power and glory of the higher-ups ...
Jul 15, 2021 -
Re: Awakening Chapter 2: Burn
I loved this chapter, indeed I did! Blake caring for his mom is so, so sweet. I'm assuming she's not married (unless I missed a detail somewhere that said otherwise), ...
Jul 2, 2021 -
Re: Awakening Chapter 1: Chill
I'm really interested in this creation you are working on and definitely want to read more of it! I really loved how you introduced Blake's ability to see ghosts! I ...
Jul 2, 2021 -
Re: I'm in literal pain mama,
Your poem is really raw and powerful. The title summarizes the poem nicely, and and contents really immerse me in the feeling. I do feel that at certain points, my ...
Jun 21, 2021 -
Re: Pride Month: Definitions and Explanations for (Almost) Everything!
Thank you for writing this article for pride month! I think it's good for individuals to be properly informed of the terms the LGBTQ+ community uses regardless of their opinions! ...
Jun 18, 2021 -
Re: On Wings of Fire: Chapter 1, Part 1
I was really intrigued by the title of this project, and found the first chapter. I have to say, I love this already! Your descriptions and your imagery are detailed, ...
Jun 14, 2021 -
Re: Just Imagine
I really, really liked the imagery here. It's not too detailed to where I easily zone out to it, and then forget what I'm reading (this happens to me whenever ...
Jun 14, 2021 -
Re: Breaking Up With Imaginary You
This poem hit a spot in my heart, as someone who has gone through a break up this year. Although my situation does not align too much with the story ...
Jun 11, 2021
