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Re: Why I Music
Absolutely love this essay. I sometimes write essays but sadly they never get posted on here. Anyway, you really created a good piece here. I love how you talk about ...
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Re: from the eyes of a chicken
This is super funny to read but there are other ways of chicken speak like Bawk, Bugawk, bukka. But I love this. The ending is........interesting. Oh and...............................................
Jan 9, 2024 -
Re: Sincerely, Yours-Chapter two: Every Rose Has Its Thorn
First off, the title reminds me of this one song I heard of the same name. (which you referenced in the story) It is not a bad is just....I don't ...
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Re: Roadkill
Wow. This is a great piece. As humans we worry about being forgotten by peers, by friends, by anybody. We just do not want to be alone. When we are ...
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Re: Empty Thoughts
This was a great poem! I love the question that you are asking...why would be allowed to suffer...for nothing? I look at the world and there is so much suffering ...
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Re: Moonlight
Best. Story. Ever. Spooky month has started, and this is the perfect story for it. I love it. I love i. I love it. I can immediately infer at the ...
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Re: there's something wrong with me
This is one of the greatest stories I have read on here. I can really just....taste the raw emotion in this piece. The anger, the sadness, everything. I think this ...
Oct 9, 2023 -
Re: Anthony Davidson, lost and alone
This is...wow. Spectacular is the only word I can think of at this moment. I love horror stories...and I sometimes make morbid jokes. So...lets break this down. [*quote]Rhian didn’t smile. ...
Oct 9, 2023 -
Re: Highway of Darkness
This is a pretty good story. There could be a little more elaboration on exactly how long this person has been in captivity. This appears to be a story about ...
Sep 22, 2023 -
Re: The Old Man
This story is very good. I really like it. First off, the man was clearly afraid, and the darkness seemed to be feeding off his fear. You really used a ...
Sep 18, 2023 -
Re: A Quiet World
This is a great story. honestly, I think that there are always people who are ignored, and the ones that are well known are not. That's the sad truth of ...
Sep 18, 2023 -
Re: I'm growing up.
THIS IS SO GOOD. Firstly, I love how you go through the events. Honestly I do not think I will be able to ever write this way. This shows so ...
Sep 18, 2023 -
Re: Behind Closed Windows
If I had one word to describe this story, it would be wow. The pace of the story was great, your wording and your descriptions were awesome. Honestly, I could ...
May 3, 2023 -
Re: H-2-U
This story is AMAZING. Climate change is a big, big problem and I think this story shows (in a fictional sense) what could happen if we do not combat climate ...
May 2, 2023 -
Re: The Civilian Pt. 1
This is a great story. I love the dystopian genre, and this story screams dystopian. First, I would like to say that your descriptions are on point and really detailed, ...
May 2, 2023
