Razcoon

Yeah I might add to it a little. Thanks for the feedback. Do you mind if/when I change it, if I contact you for review?

I was thinking of maybe adding some instrumental somewhere in the middle to make up for the length or something, but I can't think of any more stanzas to add. ...

I'm thinking about it. Assuming you've seen the sample video, I'm trying to make "instead of numbing my mind" and I end up dragging out the "instead" and saying the ...

Your wording confused me a little. Are you suggesting I change it to "all I want is peace instead of numbing my mind"?

Verses: Bm, Am, Dm, Am Chorus: Em, G, C, (I think this last one is a D7?) Little endy thing: Em, G, Dm, Am My ukulele is tuned a half ...

Haha thanks a lot for the review (no really I appreciate it) but this is song lyrics, not a poem. Meaning grammar doesn't count here as it's meant to be ...

Thanks! Also, you're right, I am frustrated with this person, haha.

Oh, I forgot, that's why it's funny that it helps me sleep. Because the person who gave me the mix is the reason it's hard to.

Thanks for the feedback, Jabble Babble! And to explain the second stanza...xD This is actually about a friend I recently lost, a really close friend, and the third song on ...

Thank you so much for the feedback! :3

Thank you so much! I'm sorry it took me this long to read your response, but you're right about the way I feel about space--so vast it's confining.

Thank you! And yeah, but I'm still editing it.

'Tis fine, Walker darling! Honestly, I don't see myself as much of a poet either. By that, I mean I NEVER write poetry. I was actually pretty skeptical as to ...

I'm too lazy to review right now, but I'm curious. Is this a runaway letter? It came off to me at first as a suicide note.

Just a comment. You and Ryan sound really sweet together. :3