RayneBow

StoryWeaver13 - Thanks! This poem is actually pretty personal, and not meant to be really.. "angsty emo." I geuss to someone who hasn't been through what I have would see ...

i really liked this poem! Circle does rhyme with purple, so kudos! Ironically enough, I have never thought of rhyming anything with purple and its my favorite colour! Keep up ...

i really like this! the flow was nice, and it made a lot of sense. its really relatable. (: keep it up! -rayne

have I ever mentioned how much I love your work?! I really like the flow of this poem. Maybe its my inexperience, but I found no flaws! :D --rayne

thanks for the reviews! earendil - i realize this poem does lack real emotion. i wasn't sure how to put more emotion into it, so I apologize.

Wow. I liked this poem. It flowed well, made sense, and was really just a good poem. Keep it up! --Rayne

really good poem! end of story.

I love how it tells exactly how fickle love is, and how fast feelings change about someone. I like how you put in so much emotion and made it so ...

Great poem! I didnt see any mistakes with this, so yay! :D It really tells a sort of story, about how fickle young love can be. You did a really ...

I love this! It has a fun beat and is very easy to read. I just wanted to point out that on the word Art you posted two A's! Probably ...

i LOVE this poem. the way you express your emotions so well makes it feel as if im feeling it. i have no criticism for this poem. keep writing, keep ...