RavenBlack

Thanks for clearing that up :-)

Yeah I wrote a script version and loved it so much that I wanted to write it as a novel. :-D Thanks I didn't think about that. I thought since ...

I agree. But I think we have to go through the trials and failures to improve, even though it may take a long time.

Thanks for the empowering words and advice and again great piece :-)

Thanks so much. sorry this is late too, I've been busy of late. Thanks again. :-D

Thanks for the review glad you loved it :-D

Hey RavenBlack here! Great piece, not much happened as it was just Abel going back home. Overall, I saw nothing wrong, the description was perfect, not to little and not ...

Thanks so much for the review! Helps a lot! :-D

Thanks so much for the review! I agree with what your saying but I had a word limit of 1500 or 1550 words max and this is 1547 words. Should ...

Thanks for the review :-D

Thank you so much! It was very difficult for me to adjust to but fun to write. Does this layout still count if it's a screenplay?

Thanks so much. This is my first time writing a screenplay and I must confess I didn't do much research and our teacher didn't teach us properly either. Thanks for ...

Thank you so much! Sorry for responding late, i haven't checked this in a while. At the end, that was a typo error, It was meant to be Damon not ...

Thank you so much! No need to apologize I need the harsh criticism, my teacher isn't really helping much. Thanks :-D

Ahh, that does make things a bit clear. Thanks for clearing that up.