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Re: Emotions
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Sep 9, 2025
Hi Cats!!!! I'm still trying to better my understanding of poems, sometimes i overanalyze or i just get things wrong.... If I do say anything that isn't what you were ... -
Re: NYLON - 3
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Sep 9, 2025
This chapter is vivid, cinematic, and full of momentum. It feels like stepping into a fever dream that slowly spirals into a dangerous reality. What works especially well is the ... -
Re: The Love my Parents Have.
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Sep 9, 2025
Your piece has a very heartfelt and genuine tone, one that captures both admiration and longing. What makes it especially moving is the balance you strike between honesty and affection; ... -
Re: I love you, you should know.
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Sep 9, 2025
Your poem beautifully captures the fragility and tenderness of love, moving from hesitation and fear toward mutual recognition and acceptance. The opening image of “ocean eyes” pulling the speaker -
Re: Someone To Love
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Sep 8, 2025
This poem has a very open and vulnerable quality that makes it easy to connect with. Right from the start, the repetition of “someone” builds a sense of longing. The ... -
Re: Chapter One: Rule Number One: Don't Hack Your School Network. Or If You Do, Don't Get Caught.
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Sep 8, 2025
This opening is immediately engaging. The first line sets the tone perfectly — casual, funny, and instantly intriguing. Nova’s voice carries the piece; she’s witty, sharp, and her sarcastic comm -
Re: fake it till you make it
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Sep 7, 2025
The title itself, “fake it till you make it,” sets the stage. It’s a phrase often used in self-help or casual encouragement, but here it’s repurposed into something darker — ... -
Re: dear cassidy
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Sep 7, 2025
The opening lines — “at times, i wonder if i read you in a book. / here i sit by the window, here i am undone” — immediately frame Cassidy ... -
Re: The human we all are
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Sep 7, 2025
The opening lines — “What is it you want, child of the world? / I’ll make it come true. Just say a word.” — immediately set up a dialogue. The ... -
Re: Threads Of Destiny: Echoes Of The Pendant-Book One, A Guardian's Spirit, Introduction And Prologue
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Sep 4, 2025
The opening line sets the stage with a strong, cinematic quality: “Thunder and lightning cracked in the gloomy sky. Rain poured. Small footsteps were left in the sticky mud as ... -
Re: Crimson’s origin
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Sep 2, 2025
This piece is striking for its commitment to atmosphere and tone. From the very first chapter, Crimson’s sense of isolation is clear, and it threads itself consistently through every scene. ... -
Re: the boy in the corner
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Sep 2, 2025
Hello Julia!!! I am new here and you are the second piece of work I looked at. PURELY FICTION is a poem that feels like it is carrying a hidden ...