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Sorry for such a wait but here I am to review your piece. I see you've had multiple reviews and lots of nitpicky things thrown at you, so for the ...

I met, knew and fell deeply in love with a vampire named Danny once but I have to be very careful about how I discuss our unorthodox relationship. There should ...

Hello and welcome to YWS Bfore i get into your piece of writing I would liek to remind you or tell you if you never knew that before you post ...

Hello and welcome to YWS Im so sorry for the mis-information. The 2:1 ratio isn't pushed now, but it is great encouraged to review other's work. :) This seems like ...

Hello and welcome to YWS :) Sorry for the miss info, the 2:1 ratio isnit pushed any more, but it's encouraged to review so please do :) Review: Frankly this ...

Hello bpqq365, Have a very happy welcome to Young Writer's Society :). This is a very interesting piece. But before I read the rest and review in full length I ...

Hello, I am so happy to be reviewing your piece of fiction today :)! I really liked your description and setting. Your style was empowering, you sentence structure was at ...

Hello I'm Tiffany, and I'm really happy to be your reviewer today :) I would just like to remind you that to post a work of your own you have ...

Your poem is Amazing! I love that picture it's so enticing. :) There are lots of description and imagery into your poem which I love. There's nothing I could point ...

Hey Coco, Sorry for a delay in your reviews, but Im offically back. i was getting my internet fixed :). Anywho onto the review, and I am reviewing this oppose ...

The darkness is trickling to the ground but it’s not there yet . The big, yellow-balloon sun is still resting on top of the roof across the street, flaming lots ...

Hello, and welcome to YoungWriter's Society, I agree with everything the reviewer above me has just said, but I would like to add that before posting a work of your ...

Hello and welcome to YoungWriters Society :), It looks liek you are still getting use to the site so let me help ya out a little bit. To post a ...

Whether it was from the warm, purple twilight, the sweet smell of roses, or the sounds of the little, brown finches fluttering around on the wood beneath her, Stella wasn’t ...

Amazing! Welcome to Young Writer's Society. I would just like to help ya out a little bit. For every piece you wirte you have to review two other pieces of ...