Rascalover

Hey, Thanks for requesting a review. The meat of the review will consist of grammatical errors and then I'll give you an overall view of what I think of your ...

Hey, Thanks for requesting review. I generally point out grammatical errors. First thing I noticed though was towards the end you don't have a line of space between your dialogue ...

Hello, Thanks for requesting a review! Here we go: You just make me feel so bereft. I feel like sometimes you are trying to force a rythme. Like the word ...

Hello, Thank you so much for requesting a review. I have been busy lately, but here I am. For future reference: edit your piece when you get reviews so that ...

Hey, Thanks for the request, and letting me know this was up. Since you know the drill, I'll just dive right on in to your review. Three days. Three days ...

Hey, Thanks for the request! I really love the emotion and word choice for this piece, and I think it's very unique the way you make the stanzas two lined ...

Hey, Thanks for requesting a review, and I am so sorry this so late but there was a death in the family. Most of what I had to say has ...

Hey, Here I am again by request; once again thanks for requesting a review, and I am so sorry it took me a while to get it to you. Now ...

Hey, Thanks for requesting a review. Sorry it is so late, but there was a death in the family. Now I am ready to take a peek at your chapters. ...

Hey, Thanks for requesting a review! My review will consist of mostly grammar mistakes, and I see that you have alot of reviews so far; if I am redundant please ...

Hello, Thank you for requesting a review. During this review I will nit-pick grammatical errors and similar things and give you an overall opinion of your piece. Don't take it ...

Hey, Thanks for requesting a review; I am sorry that it took me like forever to get it done, but here it is. and (some of us) talked long into ...

Hey, Sorry it took me a while to get to this, but thank you for requesting a review! Wow, it looks like you have alot of good reviews here; I'll ...

Hey, I like the idea of this, but at times I felt like none of the stanzas were talking about the same thing; were they suppose to be connected? Also, ...

Hey, Welcome to YWS! During my review I nit-pick on grammar, so if I seem I am being harsh don't be afraid it's only in love. I also want to ...