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Rascalover

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Spiritual Re: Luciferi Futou ( F***ER OF SATAN)

    Hi! This was a very unique spin on heaven and hell. i really like the character relationships you have formed in this story. I love the idea of a woman ...

    Nov 18, 2014
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Lyrical Re: Thank God for Today

    Hey! I love this poem, half because I am a Christian and half because you have an amazing ability to write poetry! This is beautiful and it flows so smoothly. ...

    Feb 3, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Our Last Night

    Hey! First let me begin by saying I really like the idea of this poem and the repetition at the end gives it some demanding rhythm, but I would like ...

    Feb 3, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Stress Test

    I really like the imagery here, but I am kind of confused as to why you added the part about your family history. I can kind of see how it's ...

    Feb 3, 2014
  • Short Story » General, Romantic Re: Foxes - One

    Hey, Thanks for requesting a review! I'm not really sure how to use this new set up... don't know how to quote and things like that, so please bear with ...

    Feb 7, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Son of the Dragon chapter 1

    Hey, oh wow, I totally didn't see your request in my review for food thread, so I am really sorry that this is so late. This really didn't interest me... ...

    Jan 25, 2012
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Four People Nina Helped (And the One She Couldn't)- P1

    Hey, Thanks for requesting a review. Since you don't want a grammar filled review this is going to be short and simple. A lot of these reviews are absolutely correct, ...

    Jan 25, 2012
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: I am here

    Hey, Thanks for requesting a review! I really don't understand the gist of this poem. Is it about a boy who likes a girl who likes a different boy? I ...

    Jan 24, 2012
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Euthanasia- it murders humanity!

    Hey! Thanks for requesting a review! This was an interesting piece, but I agree with Snoink. I don't really see the main argument here.Maybe research it a little more and ...

    Jan 24, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Hate List--- Pilot

    Hey, Thanks for requesting a review! Going back to Southwest Middle School after the summer break is an easy task to handle for Lauren Pitt. Maybe try to reword this ...

    Jan 21, 2012
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: Redemption

    Hey, Thanks for requesting a review! I am, by no means naïve, nor am I in denial. There should be a comma after means because by no means is a ...

    Jan 16, 2012
  • Other » General, General Re: The Pain

    Hey, Thanks for requesting a review! There were a lot of grammar mistakes in this, but I kind of get the feeling that you threw this together really fast and ...

    Jan 15, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Space Between Infinity- 1

    Hey, Thanks for requesting a review! And there was me, standing on the side, head tilted, watching my family mourn my dead body. Never start a sentence with a conjunction ...

    Jan 15, 2012
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Blood on my hands(edited)

    Hey, Thansks for requesting a review! Most of my review will be grammar mistakes, but I will try to give you an overall view of what I think of your ...

    Nov 19, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: deleted

    Hello again, Once again, my review will be mostly grammar. The pillow beneath me was heavenly soft, and as I eased my eyes open I saw the metal ceiling fan ...

    Nov 17, 2011


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