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Re: Luciferi Futou ( F***ER OF SATAN)
Hi! This was a very unique spin on heaven and hell. i really like the character relationships you have formed in this story. I love the idea of a woman ...
Nov 18, 2014 -
Re: Thank God for Today
Hey! I love this poem, half because I am a Christian and half because you have an amazing ability to write poetry! This is beautiful and it flows so smoothly. ...
Feb 3, 2014 -
Re: Our Last Night
Hey! First let me begin by saying I really like the idea of this poem and the repetition at the end gives it some demanding rhythm, but I would like ...
Feb 3, 2014 -
Re: Stress Test
I really like the imagery here, but I am kind of confused as to why you added the part about your family history. I can kind of see how it's ...
Feb 3, 2014 -
Re: Foxes - One
Hey, Thanks for requesting a review! I'm not really sure how to use this new set up... don't know how to quote and things like that, so please bear with ...
Feb 7, 2012 -
Re: Son of the Dragon chapter 1
Hey, oh wow, I totally didn't see your request in my review for food thread, so I am really sorry that this is so late. This really didn't interest me... ...
Jan 25, 2012 -
Re: The Four People Nina Helped (And the One She Couldn't)- P1
Hey, Thanks for requesting a review. Since you don't want a grammar filled review this is going to be short and simple. A lot of these reviews are absolutely correct, ...
Jan 25, 2012 -
Re: I am here
Hey, Thanks for requesting a review! I really don't understand the gist of this poem. Is it about a boy who likes a girl who likes a different boy? I ...
Jan 24, 2012 -
Re: Euthanasia- it murders humanity!
Hey! Thanks for requesting a review! This was an interesting piece, but I agree with Snoink. I don't really see the main argument here.Maybe research it a little more and ...
Jan 24, 2012 -
Re: The Hate List--- Pilot
Hey, Thanks for requesting a review! Going back to Southwest Middle School after the summer break is an easy task to handle for Lauren Pitt. Maybe try to reword this ...
Jan 21, 2012 -
Re: Redemption
Hey, Thanks for requesting a review! I am, by no means naïve, nor am I in denial. There should be a comma after means because by no means is a ...
Jan 16, 2012 -
Re: The Pain
Hey, Thanks for requesting a review! There were a lot of grammar mistakes in this, but I kind of get the feeling that you threw this together really fast and ...
Jan 15, 2012 -
Re: The Space Between Infinity- 1
Hey, Thanks for requesting a review! And there was me, standing on the side, head tilted, watching my family mourn my dead body. Never start a sentence with a conjunction ...
Jan 15, 2012 -
Re: Blood on my hands(edited)
Hey, Thansks for requesting a review! Most of my review will be grammar mistakes, but I will try to give you an overall view of what I think of your ...
Nov 19, 2011 -
Re: deleted
Hello again, Once again, my review will be mostly grammar. The pillow beneath me was heavenly soft, and as I eased my eyes open I saw the metal ceiling fan ...
Nov 17, 2011
