Ranger51

Wow, thanks for the feedback! I see what you mean with the visuals, although I personally have always liked abstract, "big" things that aren't too visuals-specific. But, seeing as how ...

Thanks! I'm still pretty new at this whole poetry thing, so I really appreciate the feedback (for both this and my old one). Rhythm and rhyme were already definitely on ...

Wow, I actually never saw my own poem that way. XD I can see what you mean, though. I'm glad you liked it! Thanks so much!

That's actually exactly what this was about, I'm so so glad you find it inspiring! :D I've honestly never considered myself a poet - I mean, it was a thing ...

Aaah, thank you! I was really anxious about this one, especially since I've never considered poetry my forte - I'm so glad you liked it!

Thanks, I appreciate this! Glad you liked that part - it was one of my favorite bits to write. ^^ ...Yeah, I'm just going to come out and admit that ...

Well, I'd actually written a lot in advance, and I ran into too many plot issues and flat characters... It just kind of took a nosedive. But I'm basically going ...

Thank you so much for this! I'm going to make a confession now: I'd given up on this. I've been feeling terrible about it, but I wrote myself into a ...

O.O That was... awesome. I'd really like to review this, but I'm honestly a little bit speechless. Not many pieces ever make me physically react, but my jaw literally dropped ...

I like it... if the prologue is supposed to be like the rest of the story, though, you should make it more like a narrative (third-person omniscient, I guess, unless ...

AMEN. That is all I have to say. *bows*

Whoaah.... I wish I could write poetry like this. You have such an amazing gift and you're using it so well! I can't really review this... I want to see ...

Ooh! That's really good! The ironic thing about it is that I'm procrastinating by reading this in the first place.... >.

That's awesome! I can really connect to this - I've got a past I really don't like revisiting but I find myself reliving every sleepless night anyways. I can't really ...