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Rainn

Colors of Late Dusk

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: About a Day

    Ok...Also, you must understand that I never said 'fire'. :) Thanks for your review.

    Jan 30, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: About a Day

    Why thank you for this wonderful review! I will take a look at the things you mentioned and probably will use them :)

    Jan 29, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Lyrical Re: Beautiful Girl

    Wow...This is a very emotional, compelling, sad, happy, scary, horrific, and bbeeaauuttiiffuull poem. It just radiates. I see nothing wrong with it. Your punctuation, spelling, format, and layout are

    Sep 26, 2012
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: Silent Moment

    Thanks :}

    Sep 22, 2012
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: Silent Moment

    Thank you for this amazing review :) I am glad to know that you like it! I do tend to write about nature(usually winter), but on occasion I get other ...

    Sep 21, 2012
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Morning Star

    Haha! It is not a love poem. I don't really know why I did that last line, but I couldn't think of anything better at the time. Thanks!

    Jul 27, 2012
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Time...and a Rainstorm

    Thank you for critiquing, even though you didn't like it. (:

    Jul 27, 2012
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Morning Star

    Thanks! I do plan(or hope) to add more as soon as possible. Thank you again!

    Jul 27, 2012
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Morning Star

    Thanks, Roxy (: I hope to add more soon, but It was 11:00 and I needed to sleep, haha.

    Jul 27, 2012
  • Poetry » Other, Other Re: Story Time

    Thank you, very very much, for being harsh (: I really appreciat you taking the time.

    Jul 24, 2012
  • Poetry » Other, Other Re: Story Time

    Hello (: Thank you for being harsh! I was referencing the song "Twinkle Twinkle Little Star", because it is so well known to children. Also, my mind is a bit ...

    Jul 24, 2012
  • Poetry » Other, Other Re: Story Time

    Yes, sorry. I did mean "Imagine". Oops.. (: At the end, I did rush, for I had to get it posted quickly due to other activities. I plan on going ...

    Jul 23, 2012
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: Uprising

    Oops, I meant; "From danger , cowards will flee"

    Jul 23, 2012
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: In the Distance

    Thank you for this wonderful review :D

    Jul 23, 2012
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: Me.

    Yes, I agree. Everyone is perfect in there own way :)

    Jul 23, 2012


People say I love you all the time - when they say, ‘take an umbrella, it’s raining,’ or ‘hurry back,’ or even ‘watch out, you’ll break your neck.’ There are hundreds of ways of wording it - you just have to listen for it, my dear.
— John Patrick, The Curious Savage