Raindeer

Thank you :D

Wow, I'm glad you liked it. Haha. :P Yes, sometimes it is good. xP

Thanks! I'm not editing this chapter (until I'm finished with the novel, maybe) but I'll definitely add more background and details to the next chapter. Thank you again. :)

No problem :)

Yeah. :/ Heh.

Thank you! I'll go fix those things you pointed out right now. :D

Thank you so much! I know. I kept looking at that sentence, and I was just like bluh. >.< And I'll try to improve on those things too! Thanks!

Just saying, you might want to make this 18+ for language.

Thank you for your review! I don't normally have good description, ahaha. Thanks again :)

Thank you! :)

Thank you very much! :3

It's all right. It happens to everyone ;) And you are very welcome!

Awesome!

No problem! And I thought you said you were entering this so something in the description... But oh. Silly me. :P

Yes, that might be good. Good luck! ^.^