Raindeer

Hey Carlito:) I'm a total YA fan so I'm really excited for this, haha. I enjoyed this first chapter a lot - right off the bat I can relate to ...

Hi there starry! I saw this in the green room and I decided to just go ahead and read the previous chapter so I could know what's going on (I'm ...

Hey, manilla! I hope I'm catching this before it's due, but it's been quite a while so I'm not sure if you've turned it in already. It's in the green ...

Hi there!:) I just now saw this in the green room, so you've presumably already read this to your class. I'm not sure how much more feedback you're looking for ...

Hi there Liberty! Hope you're doing well. I'm a big fan of short stories, and I'm always impressed when I read a story as short as this that has a ...

Hello there MoominTroll! Welcome to YWS. :) I hope you're enjoying it here! Let's hop right in. I think this character had a really interesting voice. I really liked some ...

Helloooo! Okay, so, holy moly 0-0 You always add such dark twists at the end of your chapters that leave me practically speechless. In a good way, of course, but ...

Hey there! Okay, so woah. o-o I guess Gaspard wasn't a main character, lol. What a horrific death! This thing is really, really creepy. Probably not a good idea for ...

Hello! Well, okay, so my previous review I mentioned how I wished there was more detail about the setting, and here we are! Right in the first paragraph, haha. So ...

Hi again! I’m loving the story. I like how we’re introduced to Jakobina, who appears to be slightly important. She’s curiously intriguing and hopefully we’ll learn more about her as ...

Hey there! I was actually going to just review the third chapter because I saw it hanging in the green room but I decided it was better to start from ...

What is uuuppp! Happy Review Day. Usually I’m not a fan of these after-life in Hell stories just because they bore me and they all feel/read similar, but this was ...

Hi Morgan! This really intrigued me. I have more questions, but I think that's good because it really makes me want to read more. Who is this stranger? What's going ...

fraey!!! What is uuup. I don’t think I’ve ever read any of your prose before, so this is really exciting. And I’m glad I caught this on the first chapter. ...

Hello Anma!! Welcome to YWS. I really like the title to your story and it was what initially drew me in. The subtle alliteration and the fact that it’s a ...