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Re: Flower Boy [Part 2]
Hey there! Tis me, trying a review. Okay so first off, as far as I can tell, there were no spelling errors or typos or anything of the sort except ...
May 27, 2018 -
Re: Possibly A New Story I Do?
Woah woah woah woah. Now I gotta know more. That ending...that ending...hoooo boi. Did the dude vomit? Or were the pillow and mattress always green and that was just insignificant ...
Mar 7, 2018 -
Re: I am Teddy (A short story based off a prompt!)
This...this hit me right in the feels. You've done well. It's nice and short, so it's not boring, but I did get confused when it said, seethe tears in the ...
Feb 25, 2018 -
Re: Bitter Oracle - Chapter 2 - My Programed Death
Hello again! Tis me, flailing at my keyboard trying to give you something helpful. So, we meet the main character today, AND we get info on this, "trance" thing we ...
Feb 25, 2018 -
Re: Bitter Oracle - Chapter 1 - Nobel Shindig
Hey! It's me! The person you've probably never heard of before! Trying to leave a helpful review I like the way you ended the story. I was surprised, I thought ...
Feb 23, 2018 -
Re: Following the stars - chapter 1
Hey there! I'm going to try to leave a helpful review! There was one place where you put the comma on the outside of the quotation marks. But it looks ...
Feb 21, 2018 -
Re: The Infection: New World
It's a really good story, with nice descriptions which gave me a vivid idea of what was happening. What I don't understand though, is his willingness to inject the liquid ...
Jan 28, 2018 -
Re: Yokai Nights Volume 1: chapter 1
This...this looks like it's going to be good. I like it already. These kinds of stories are usually some of my favourites (even if I'm looking at anime as I ...
Jan 28, 2018